Besides the negative comments from some reviewers, they all seemed to find something positive to say about my book, which I am very grateful. You will see some of these in my tweets. Also many comments were made to advise me on how to be a better writer. I do plan to heed their advise on the next book in the series. Currently, I am proofreading this book again and revising where appropriate. I am grateful that none of the reviewers gave me less than 3 stars. Maybe there is still hope. If you wish to read the reviews in their entirety, please go to http://www.amazon.com/Nestorian-Alliance-Trader-Adventure-ebook/dp/B005KDNZJ0/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1319667615&sr=1-1.
In the end I do appreciate all the comments of the reviewers.